Tuesday, August 19, 2008

What must his teachers think of us?

Huck brought home a notebook in which he was practicing his writing and creativity. Here is his entry:

Yanky doodle went to mars riding on a rocket
stuck his head up his butt and saw some hershys choklate
Yanky doodle keep it up yanky doodle dandy
all the work that you have done and now you'll get some candy

9 comments:

Tenore said...

I love this rhyme! So imaginative and well constructed.

Well, then again, I was never the typical teacher.

So here's a teacher's unteacherly response, lol:

Well, done, Huck
and best of luck

in showing Anne (Knowlton)
that yes, you can

write sublime rhyme
every time!

=)

Anonymous said...

OMGs that is just hysterical!!!

Tell him is is an EXCELLENT writer

Amanda said...

*rolls on the floor laughing hysterically*

Unknown said...

I haven't heard that version before. I LOVE it. That is some funny shit. LMAO!

Debbi said...

Very creative.

TigerYogiji said...

Oh My!!! (LMAO!!!)

Anonymous said...

Who cares what the teachers think?

(From the lips of your homeschooling mom friend) ;)

Ohjeeze said...

Why don't you submit that ode you wrote to a tomato this summer? The teacher will know where he gets his talent from.

JKB said...

LOL!!!